WEEK 24

THIS IS THE TRANSCRIPT FOR MY RADIO ADVERTISMENT

“Lambeth times (pause) is the new weekly newspaper catering for the people of Lambeth .Covering on entertainment,   tax and crime, upcoming events within the friendly borough. Take part sending letters about your neighbourhood so it can be published in the newspaper ju8st for you.

Lambeth times giving you all the information you need at your local newsagent now”

Below are changes which I made after, feedback, on how to make my radio advert not to sound dull. Because I believe the start was a bit to dull, so I made changes by repeating the name of my local newspaper three times to emphasise on it, and from most adverts research, you come across some adverts which repeat in order to get the message across of what is being promoted. In my case it’s a local newspaper.

“Lambeth times! Lambeth times! Lambeth times! is the new weekly newspaper catering for the people of Lambeth .Covering on entertainment, weather,   tax and crime, upcoming events within the friendly borough. Take part sending letters about your neighbourhood so it can be published in the newspaper just for you.

Lambeth times giving you all the information you need at your local newsagent NOW!”

I also decided to add, the background theme music, I wanted something not to fast or not to slow, but something which flow, so I decided to use LANBRINTH – let the sunshine as it fitted the criteria of what I needed.